Wednesday, June 17, 2009

GOLD HEART MANOR

"I'm telling ya, that house is haunted",Audrey exclaimed as she spoke on the phone.

"You're such a liar!!",declared Tyler.

"No I'm not",objected Audrey, "I'm telling the truth.

"Get me some proof and I'll believe ya," challenged Tyler as he hung up.

"Argggggggggghhhhhhhh!!!!,"screamed Audrey with frustration "Why doesn't anyone believe me!!!!!!!".

"Maybe because you're a liar!,"Declared Meggie.

"Shut up you little brat!",mumbled Audrey under her breath.

"I'm telling mom you told me to shut UP!",mocked Meggie.

"Ooh!!!, get out of my room", screamed Audrey.
She slammed the door on Meggie and went back to her computer and mumbled," I don't have any proof".

An hour earlier Audrey had driven by gold heart manor. It's an old mansion that is in perfect condition. When she looked up at the attic window she saw a face, a face of a men. He had a grim look on his face. His eyes as dark as the night sky. His wavy blond hair, shiny as the sun. His face as white as chalk. She felt bad for his sad face. She wanted to go up,but she knew she would be late getting home. So here she was.

"Maybe I'll go online and look up this crumby mansion," Thought Audrey as she started going online. As soon as she typed the first letters in the phone rang.

"Hell......Hello??,"stuttered Audrey.

"Hey Audrey it's me, Why does your voice sound so shaky?," Tyler said.

"No reason,"she stuttered, "I saw a face in the attic window as I drove by it!!".

"Oh what did you say?,I wasn't listening,"He exclaimed, "plus our first date is tonight!!,"he added with excitement in his voice.

"First DA...date?!, yelped Audrey feeling faint.

"Yeah arena"t you excited?,"exclaimed Tyler.

THUNK!!!!!!!!

Audrey?...Audrey!!!!!!!?,"said Tyler.

BEEP!!!!!!!!!! This is Audrey, can't talk right now, call me later!!!!

"Oh great, Now I have to go over there, just great,"He muttered.

Uh!!!!!!!!,"Audrey said in surprise instantly remembering who she was on the phone with.

"Hey Tyler,Tyler?,"questioned Audrey.

DING DONG!!!!!!!

"I'll get it!!!,"she screamed as she ran to the door. When she opened it she found a surprise on her doorstep. Right in front of her stood Tyler, soaked by the rain.

"Tyler!?,"she said startled.

"Hi Audrey,"Tyler scowled.

''Do you still wanna go on that date?,'' Audrey exclaimed.

''Oh yeah sure,let's go, '' he said sarcastically.

''Why are you acting like this?,''She snapped.

''Oh, no reason'',he mocked.

'' You're acting weird Tyler!!,''she cried.

''Hey Audrey let's go on that date,''snickered Tyler.


Audrey said," Tyler I don't think we should go at all''.

"Oh I think we should'' he smiled as grabbing her arm.

Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Iam reading Goosebumps:The haunted school By R.L.STINE. The Genre of this book is Horror. It is this Genre because a twelve year old kid starts hearing voices and no one is there. The school is haunted.

It all starts while A twelve year old and his friends are getting the gym ready for the school dance. The school's color is usally Red and Black, but they forget the red paint. Nobody wants to go get it so the protaganist volunteers to go get it himself. He gets lost and finds himself in a room full of statues. What's weird about them is that they are wearig clothes from the 1800's. The principal walks in on him. He thought he was in trouble , but she only leads him out of the room. She leads him back to the gym. He and his friends get the banner done . The next day he starts hearing voices and trys to find out where they come from. It's the day of the dance. He and his friend go to the older part of the school. They get lost and find themselves face to face at a dead end. His friend trips into him and he flies into the wall. Instead of smashing into the wall he goes through it. It leads into a dark forgotten hallway, but he goes anyway. He traces his hand aginst the wall until he finds a button. He presses it. It opens up a elevator. They go inside. None of the buttons are working. He presses the open button and it still dosen't work. Then he presses the level 3 button. It starts moving....

My most favorite part in the book is when the girl protaganist starts screaming for her red lipstick. The bully of the school had stolen the lipstick away and held it out of the girl's reach. The girl started going crazy for the lipstick and starts jumping all over the bully. That was until the boy protagonist got the lipstick back.

I reccomend this book to 4th-9th grades because it is a very exciting and adventerous story that will give you the laughs and the chills. It is also kinda giving a lesson.



Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Gold Heart Mansion

Hey,look the door is opening,whispered Alexis.

"Let's go check it out!", screamed Ilene.

"Will you guys quiet down."whispered Patrick.

"Where did you come from?!",screamed Alexis.

THUMP!

"What was t...that!?",exclaimed Patrick.

"Probably some kind of animal",whispered Alexis.

"Patrick is scared",laughed Ilene.

"Iam not!!!",screamed Patrick.

THUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"It sounded closer this time!!!",yelped Patrick.

"It's probably Cloud",swore Alexis.

"But, won't we get caught?",whispered Ilene.

"You've already been caught!",yelled Cloud.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!",screamed Patrick.

"Oh, stop screaming like a girl Patrick",whispered Alexis.

THUMP,AUGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

"OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH",yelped Patrick.

"You guys, we need to get out of here now",whispered Cloud.

" Um cloud,Alexis is gone",whispered Ilene.

Alexis screamed,"I'm over here you guys!!!".

Crashhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

"ALEXIS BE CAREFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!",screamed Ilene.

"I knew it was a bad idea, I knew it",whimpered Patrick.

" I'm going with her, stay here",whispered cloud.

"I'm worried everyone is gonna get hurt",exclaimed Ilene.

"Alexis went inside!!!",screamed Patrick.

"I'll have to go get her,as I said stay here",exclaimed Cloud.

Screammmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"That was Alexis!!!!!"yelled Ilene.

"We should all go in", exclaimed Patrick.

"We'll have to", swore Cloud.

"Hey you guys, I'm back!!!",screamed Alexis.

"Oh we thought something was wrong",said Ilene

"Why did you scr....scream?", stuttered Patrick.

"I didn't scream?"said Alexis.

"Then who did?"questioned Cloud.

"Hey did you guys notice that all the screaming has stopped?"questioned Patrick.

"Yeah,that's freaky",exclaimed Ilene.

"I made it stop", said Alexis.

"Really?", questioned Cloud.

"I found out that I'm the heir to the house, I have the key,"said Alexis.

"That is so cool!!!",screamed Ilene.

"Well this is a happily ever after for once",exclaimed Cloud.